Lunar Eclipse

malt [i hope this hasn't been used too often before, I didn't want to read through 92 pages to check. :)]

My goodness. What a turn. But he said she would be his soon? What what? Is this some evil plot of his? I certainly hope Ellen and the Marquis wind ...

Ooh, I absolutely loved this - your characters are very well defined, kudos on that. I especially like the way the Marquis is so charming and she hates his guts...and ...

I absolutely loved this piece, it especially struck a chord with me because I've experienced something similar. I only saw a few spelling issues, which could be fixed pretty easily. ...

Running with Scissors by Augusten Burroughs - just started it.

I wrote this poem a while ago, and I love it. However, everyone who has read it says something should be edited, it needs to be shortened. I have to ...

Thanks, everyone. And Fireweed, in answer to your question, not only do I play harp, I play guitar and piano. . . Acorn is a magazine for teen writers that's ...

Hey! Welcome! I notice that we are the same age. . . :) I sing, but not just in the shower... I'm kinda new too, but I definitely look forward ...

Ooh. Okay. I'm not the best at critiquing poetry, but...I really liked this poem! Umm...I can't think of much to say other than what has already been said, my emphasis ...

Hey! I liked the poem, and the concept, but it seems rather plain. You could probably revise it to make it more appealing to editors. There wasn't much imagery, just ...

Elaine Elaine sits on the bottom stair, "I like not having to be anywhere," and as she sits, she stops and stares and nobody, nobody, nobody cares. Elaine sits on ...

This story was really well written! It was an interesting concept, definitely - the idea was very original, plus, I loved your approach. Madison and Lonnie are friends? At first ...

I really liked this poem - I found it easy to relate to, and I think you conveyed the message well. I loved the way you repeated parts of stanza ...

Hello name is Gretta but here you can call me Luna or whatever floats your boat - I highly doubt that I would respond if you called me, say, Amanda, ...